Rah and Soul

Tried again to draw a guy.... did not work out so well, but im putting it up any way.. So the guys name is Rah and he is a guardian of a fire temple that worships the sun. Soul is the girl and she is a spirit that was trapped on earth as a wandering spirit, one day she appears in the temple and meets Rah. the two begin a long journey to find a way for soul to get back her name and ascend into heaven, but many troubles pass them on their way.....and so on... i might try to write a story about this but idk, well this isn't a good drawing but if you like it then cool.